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Poetry Module (Extended Metaphor Poem)

Dreams

My dreams are fire 

They spread recklessly 

My thoughts make me tired

Positive, Negative,  essentially 


My brain creates the fire 

My body bears the consequences 

I keep reaching higher 

I run through all of the fences 


I wake up relieved 

I wake up sad 

I often feel deceived 

But it's not that bad


Because dreams are an escape

It is something we all desire 

I go through my days 

Waiting until I am tired


Dreams spread with fire 

Dream only when tired 

Dream dream dream

Dreams are what I desire 



Derrick D’Amato 


(Recording of Poem) 
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